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2nd Oct 2011, 11:12 PM
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demontales 2nd Oct 2011, 11:12 PM edit delete
demontales
Not the most original piece of dialogue, but it says what it's gotta say about the characters. I also experimented with different pen, which seems to make the art blurrier when scanned.
Also, I made a "About" page, and the "Characters" one is in construction.

I tried the 24 Hour Comics Day challenge yesterday(24 pages in 24 hour). And if you're interested in seeing it it's at this address http://dt24.thecomicseries.com/

After doing that, my normal art seem a lot prettier to me. The only thing that bugs me in this page is the last panel with Chris which looks... not like himself, but I can't get my finger on why. Almost getting an uncanny valley feeling.
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machinehead 3rd Oct 2011, 9:53 PM edit delete reply
machinehead
Did he know it was a transwoman?
demontales 3rd Oct 2011, 11:14 PM edit delete reply
demontales
He didn't know "she" was trans when he met her, but he knew when they started dating.
wildcard 4th Oct 2011, 3:34 PM edit delete reply
wildcard
I reckon there actually has been some improvement in the art, specifically in the faces and that last panel of Marie Claire. Nice work :)

And yeah, love and procreation may just be the hard coding of our DNA but it's there to stay... well at least until we download into robotic bodies or something...
demontales 6th Oct 2011, 9:58 PM edit delete reply
demontales
Thanks :) When thumbnailing and sketching, I thought that drawing of Marie-Claire would be very boring and it turned out much better than I'd thought
hrwilliams 4th Oct 2011, 4:28 PM edit delete reply
hrwilliams
And this conversation had so much potential for hilarity. These girls aren't very good friends! ;)
demontales 6th Oct 2011, 9:59 PM edit delete reply
demontales
Haha, yeah, it was a bit tricky because I didn't want the dialogue to be too serious, nor too ridiculous
hrwilliams 30th Oct 2011, 8:45 PM edit delete reply
hrwilliams
Where'd the updates go!
demontales 30th Oct 2011, 11:16 PM edit delete reply
demontales
They got eaten by my job and my cold. But hopefully coming back soon.
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