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19th Feb 2012, 4:23 PM
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demontales 19th Feb 2012, 4:23 PM edit delete
demontales
Funny that my favorite panel is the first since it was supposed to be something else but changed it last minute. Lots of things about this page drove me crazy, but I'm still proud of a few things.

Do you feel like the characters are lost? That things are hard to differentiate? I had planned on using ink washes, but then remembered this ink isn't waterproof at all despite the label. So I opted for cross-hatching.
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moizmad 19th Feb 2012, 6:09 PM edit delete reply
moizmad
Pigma microns are only $3 and totally waterproof also the Staedtler pigment liner.
Or just use a really fine point brush for the
outline with the ink wash inside for shading.
Sorry my french is almost zero, only word I know is "sortie" which means get lost right?
demontales 19th Feb 2012, 6:30 PM edit delete reply
demontales
I forgot to translate! *facepalm* She's saying "cya at the apartment" and "sortie" normally only means exit.

For the waterproof problem, I need to buy new ink soon so I'll probably get another brand I used to work with which was waterproof. I tend to pass through pens/markers at an alarming rate.
0ldCore 19th Feb 2012, 6:55 PM edit delete reply
0ldCore
I kinda like that you didn't translate. Mind you I'm bilingual, but hell... For anyone who cares enough, BabelFish translations is available to anyone with internet access.

Also nice ink work. I can always appreciate some tight black and white comiking!
Jacques 19th Feb 2012, 7:08 PM edit delete reply
Jacques
I didn't need a babel, and I find the input of some french a nice addition. And a very nice page, Matt! :D
demontales 19th Feb 2012, 10:57 PM edit delete reply
demontales
I'm glad the french touches are welcomed/appreciated :)

And thanks!
demontales 19th Feb 2012, 10:58 PM edit delete reply
demontales
@OldCore:I think I'll put the next translations in the author notes for those who want to read them. I don't really want to clutter my pages with them. There's probably gonna be some slang that is harder to translate on a site.
wildcard 20th Feb 2012, 2:23 AM edit delete reply
wildcard
Personally have no problem differentiating characters from the backdrop; the strong outlines and varying density of crosshatching keep it pretty clear :)
demontales 20th Feb 2012, 3:39 PM edit delete reply
demontales
Good! Glad it worked :)
machinehead 20th Feb 2012, 11:38 PM edit delete reply
machinehead
God knows I don't belong with my family either.
demontales 21st Feb 2012, 1:10 AM edit delete reply
demontales
There's probably a reason for that, one that again God only knowns. He knows all the answers, cheater
GraceClare 21st Feb 2012, 10:16 PM edit delete reply
GraceClare
The detail is really great on this page, especially the first panel.

--and I may be late to the game on this, but I really love the layout you got going on here. Super artsy.
demontales 22nd Feb 2012, 9:29 PM edit delete reply
demontales
Thanks! I haven't really received comments on the site layout, so I'm glad to have positive feedback :) (I really have to fix the comment section though)
hrwilliams 23rd Feb 2012, 2:26 PM edit delete reply
hrwilliams
I just realized, this is pretty much how real conversations go. That's nice!
demontales 25th Feb 2012, 5:27 PM edit delete reply
demontales
And that's nice to hear! :)
moizmad 12th Mar 2012, 11:24 PM edit delete reply
moizmad
Hopefully we'll have another update before the year-end?
demontales 13th Mar 2012, 12:06 AM edit delete reply
demontales
You forgot to specify which year :P
chuckwheel 7th Apr 2012, 5:48 PM edit delete reply
chuckwheel
Just read through your archive to date. Really enjoying the story and main character, very cool stuff. I like that you're experimenting some with different art techniques, I think you could do that even more, as it seems to work with the strip in that the main character is an artist. I think the dialog sound very natural too, though once or twice I got a bit confused about what was going on. IAnyway, good stuff, I hope you'll keep updating, even though it looks like its been a while since you did... I want to know more about the two-headed guy?!
demontales 8th Apr 2012, 10:36 PM edit delete reply
demontales
Wow, thanks for the compliments! It's really nice to hear. I will keep experimenting with different technique, and maybe even with colours in the next chapter.

Things have gotten a bit hectic in life and I'm not proud to say updates have been at their lowest lately, but they will come back soon, with a more solid schedule.
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